InYoung's Blog: 10월 2015

1)What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

When the other people posted the comments in my post, they help me to know the problem of my post. For example, when I missed gammar, capital, and spelling , they showed my problems through their comments.Then, I could change my post contents and I could develop my writing skills. Also, when the other people sympathized my post contents, I felt so happy. Therefore, I could communicate with them through comments.

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?

When I read the other people's post comments, I could learned their writing skills and develope my grammar skills. Also, I could find their mistakes ,and I told them what they have problems in their posts. It helped me to communicating with them, and I could improve my writing skills.Therefore, leaving a comments is helpful to each others.

Global warming causes the greenhouse effect. The greenhouse effect is typical damages of global warming. The greenhouse effect occurs when the atmosphere which surrounding the Earth absorbing the thermal infrared. The greenhouse effect has two negative phenomenon to that effects the Earth. First, the greenhouse effect generate the Earth's temperture rising. When the Earth's temperture rises, thermal expansion occurs in the sea. It is a cause that the sea-level rises. According to statistics, the sea-level rises about 3mm every year. The sea-level rises will induce flooding in coastal waters and decreasing the food and habitat for animals and fishes. For example, polar bear, great panda, java rhinoceros and another animals are endangered. Second, the greenhouse effect induce the change rainfall's amount and pattern. This means that precipitation is affected by the circulation of water. If the Earth's temperature rises, it promotes the cycle of waters. This natural phenomenon changes the amount and pattern of precipitation. As a result, this change causes droughts and floods in certain areas. For example, Bangladesh suffers flood damage. If the sea level rises 1.5m, one-sixth in Bangladesh is submerged in water. Indeed, if global warming is continued, it is not possible to ensure the safety of the Earth.