Final Draft

'Dark Sides of Euthanasia'

 

figure 1) Euthanasia Drugs

 

 

 

    

      Euthanasia does not respect life. There are three reasons why I oppose Euthanasia. First of all, human life is noble and dignified but our country has a high suicide rate. If the Korea is allowing Euthanasia, this situation bring up the terrible result of suicide rate. As a result, Euthanasia ignore respect of life. First reason is included in ‘passive Euthanasia’. 'Passive euthanasia' stop the medical care which helping life extension. For example, Euthanasia is determinded by willingness of individuals. If a patient who has no possibility selected the comfortable death, and he/she wants to care without pain during medical management, doctors help the dead of patient. These action allows the patient dead without pain. Next case is another example in army. During the war, a commander of the military shoot his soldiers who can not revive. Second, In korea, our constitution does not permit to Euthanasia. And then, I agree with Korea Constitution. If others are helping Euthanasia, it is assisted suicide. In other words, these action means that agree to murder by Euthanasia. Therefore, it could be punished in Korea. Actually, In 1997, a patient who used a respirator was died in 'boramae' hospital lacated in seoul. Because, his wife requested to hospital for removing her husband's respirator. After that, his younger brother reported to court with the fact that his older brother died by them. As a result, they were arrested on a accused of murder.This picture is showing the result about same type incident.

 

 figure 2) Incident of Euthanasia

 

 

 

 

 

 

Third, the stray dogs and cats were euthanized in order to disposing. However, some hospitals are euthanized without anesthetic using a muscle relaxant. This management causes the animals died with big pain. Thus, terrible cases are required strict management of the laws. Euthanasia controversy have existed so far. In conclusion, we need to know that a precious life and hope is removed by Euthanasia.

<Reference>

1. Kim, D. (2015, September 23). Statistics of Suicide in OECD. Retrieved December 9, 2015, from http://news.heraldcorp.com/view.php?ud=20151113001047&md=20151116003113_BL

2. Kang, G. (2013, July 31). Incident of Boramae Medical Center. Retrieved from

 http://kin.naver.com/qna/detail.nhn?d1id=7&dirId=7&docId=178332820&qb=7JWI65297IKsIOyCrOuhgA==&enc=utf8§ion=kin&rank=3&search_sort=0&spq=0&pid=SEN5CspySE4ssakTdEhsssssssC-265372&sid=OxhNoURO1KyI5yX4mDyJZg==

3, figure 1) Song, H. (2015, July 1). The Picture of Euthanasia Drugs. Retrieved from
http://news.naver.com/main/ranking/read.nhn?mid=etc&sid1=111&rankingType=popular_day&oid=081&aid=0002574004&date=20150701&type=1&rankingSectionId=104&rankingSeq=8

4, figure 2) Shin, S. (2007, August 11). Example of Incident of Euthanasia in Korea. Retrieved from http://www.gosolaw.com/board/board.php?board=news09&page=59&body_only=y&button_view=n&command=body&no=118

 5. Kim, B. (2010, February 1). Euthanized Without Anesthetic Using a Muscle Relaxant. Retrieved from http://www.ohmynews.com/NWS_Web/view/at_pg.aspx?CNTN_CD=A0001312817

'prospect of euthanasia'

<Euthanasia drugs>

Euthanasia does not respect life. There are three reasons why I oppose Euthanasia. First of all, human life is noble and dignified, but our country has a high suicide rate. If the Korea is allowing Euthanasia, this situation bring up the terrible result of suicide rate. As a result, Euthanasia ignore respect of life. First reason is included in ‘passive Euthanasia’. 'Passive euthanasia' stop the medical care which helping life extension. For example, Euthanasia is determinded by willingness of individuals. If a patient ,who has no possibility selected the comfortable death, and he/she wants to care without pain during medical management, doctors help the dead of patient. These action allows the patient dead without pain. Next case is another example in army. During the war, a commander of the military shoot his soldiers ,who can not revive. Second, In korea, our constitution does not permit to Euthanasia. And then, I agree with Korea Constitution. If others are helping Euthanasia, it is assisted suicide. In other words, these action means that agree to murder by Euthanasia. Therefore, it could be punished in Korea. Actually, In 1997, a patient ,who used a respirator was died in 'baramae' hospital lacated in seoul. Because, his wife requested to hospital for removing her husband's respirator. After that, his younger brother reported to court with the fact that his older brother died by them. As a result, they were arrested on a accused of murder.This picture is showing the result about same type incident.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

<Accident of Euthanasia>

 

 

 Third, the stray dogs and cats were euthanized in order to disposing. However, some hospitals are euthanized without anesthetic using a muscle relaxant. This management causes the animals died with big pain. Thus, terrible cases are require strict management of the laws. Euthanasia controversy have existed so far. In conclusion, we need to know that a precious life and hope is removed by Euthanasia.

Should we oppose euthanasia??

O : I oppose euthanasia.
R : reason1:Euthanasia is depriving the hope of life.
      reason2:Euthanasia causes the 'life slight tendency'.(생명경시풍조)
E : example1:Some countries allowed the euthanasia. 
      example2:Many abandoned dog and abandoned cat are euthanized.
O : Because our life is precious, euthanasia could not allowed in the world. 

Blog post #5

      Blog posting gave me ownership of knowledge. Actually, when I wrote paragraph in English, I didn’t know why writing rules are important in my paragraph. For instance, writing rules include spacing, paragraph breaks, spelling, comma, ‘FANBOYS’. Especially, when I wrote my paragraph, many informations are used in my post. Through using citation, I could tell this information comes from. It was helpful for me to writing my paragraph in safety. As a result, this experience was very necessary to understanding of knowledge and knowledge ownership.

1)What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

      When the other people posted the comments in my post, they help me to know the problem of my post. For example, when I missed gammar, capital, and spelling , they showed my problems through their comments.Then, I could change my post contents and I could develop my writing skills. Also, when the other people sympathized my post contents, I felt so happy. Therefore, I could communicate with them through comments.

 

 

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?

      When I read the other people's post comments, I could learned their writing skills and develope my grammar skills. Also, I could find their mistakes ,and I told them what they have problems in their posts. It helped me to communicating with them, and I could improve my writing skills.Therefore, leaving a comments is helpful to each others.

Class Review!

This is my class review!!

"Problem of global warming"

          

       Global warming causes the greenhouse effect. The greenhouse effect is typical damages of global warming. The greenhouse effect occurs when the atmosphere which surrounding the Earth absorbing the thermal infrared. The greenhouse effect has two negative phenomenon to that effects the Earth. First, the greenhouse effect generate the Earth's temperture rising. When the Earth's temperture rises, thermal expansion occurs in the sea. It is a cause that the sea-level rises. According to statistics, the sea-level rises about 3mm every year. The sea-level rises will induce flooding in coastal waters and decreasing the food and habitat for animals and fishes. For example, polar bear, great panda, java rhinoceros and another animals are endangered. Second, the greenhouse effect induce the change rainfall's amount and pattern. This means that precipitation is affected by the circulation of water. If the Earth's temperature rises, it promotes the cycle of waters. This natural phenomenon changes the amount and pattern of precipitation. As a result, this change causes droughts and floods in certain areas. For example, Bangladesh suffers flood damage. If the sea level rises 1.5m, one-sixth in Bangladesh is submerged in water.  Indeed, if global warming is continued, it is not possible to ensure the safety of the Earth.

    <Causes of the greenhouse effect>

<Damage of sea level rise>

 

 

 

 

 

 

<work cited>
Example of endangered animals and Bangladesh : http://kin.naver.com/qna/detail.nhn?d1id=11&dirId=1117&docId=66740814&qb=7KeA6rWs7Jio64Kc7ZmU66GcIOyduO2VnCDtlbTsiJjrqbTsg4Hsirk=&enc=utf8&section=kin&rank=5&search_sort=0&spq=0&pid=SAtHcdpySoVssul4uh0sssssssC-488580&sid=oED/jfGd0jxycGgzdv3kyA%3D%3D
Statistics URL: http://blog.naver.com/gwatercenter/150167541155
picture URL :1.http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1
                      2.http://blog.naver.com/jjy0501/100129055572
greenhouse effect URL: http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=982611&cid=47340&categoryId=47340
termal expansion URL: http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1619313&cid=50313&categoryId=50313
circulation of waters URL: http://terms.naver.com/entry.nhn?docId=1525929&cid=47340&categoryId=47340

Class review!

My ideal place to concentrate and think deeply

  The Han river is my ideal place to concentrate and think deeply.

When I arrive this place,I feel so comfortable and calmness.

There are several reasons why I feel so comfortable and calmness.
First, in the evening, the Han river's bridge has nice view. Because, when the evening, decorative lighting shines brightly. It looks so wonderful. So, it makes me to walk in Han river's bridge.Especially,when the moonlight irradiate on the Han river's surface, it is so awesome!!.At this time, the Han river's atmosphere is very comfortable and peaceful. Second, when I sit on the bench and listening to music, it makes me to focus my thinking ,and feel comfortable. Therefore, when I go to the Han river I concentrate my feeling ,and I think about my source of trouble. And I try to solve my trouble alone. So, the Han river is a place for me to help.

picture : http://m.blog.daum.net/sunny38/9994219#

How does where I live(have lived) influence how I live?

 I lived in seoul for 21 years.I think Seoul is the most special city in Korea. So, while I lived in Seoul, I influenced to Seoul.Because, Seoul has developed than in the past. When I was young, I didn't realize the advantages of Seoul. But now Seoul is one of the famous city in Korea. Therefore, while lived in Seoul, I experienced many advantages of Seoul. First of all, transportation of Seoul is so useful to move. So,whenever I want to go famous place and my University, I can move easy and fast. Second, Seoul has many famous place. For example, Myung-Dong,Hong-Dae,Gyengbokgung and so on are famous place in Seoul. So I can experienced many culture of  Korea. There are two reasons why I influenced to Seoul.